It doesn't remind me of Robots as much as it should but still, it's a swell track. Very good job.
That's why i've added the "Lord vader - breath" and the C3PO voice ;)
This track should tell a story...
You know - from the begining of that robot (that's the breath etc.) till the end - where it just rocks ! :D
Thanks anyway !
Ooooh, this is definitely one of the better RD2010 songs that I've heard. You should make it longer though. :)
The intro added so much to the song. Not because it was good, but because it was very generic. It started off very plain. I'm not sure if this was your intention but if it was that was a good thing. The way the track builds up, later you're just like "Holy shit, wow."
Cheers , just thought it conveyed movement ...
The drums are just purely fantastic. The little blips and sounds every now and then add to the track, especially that random windows sound? What was that all about? I don't know but I liked it.
I like it, especially the synths. The drums seem a little too generic. Since you have more time now, you should work on the drums and maybe add another synth or two.
Thanks man, I appreciate the feedback. I've been meaning to go back and do a full two minute version with less repetition and some better atmosphere with a good intro, and I'm looking to some better drums. I'll see what I can do in time. :D
I like it. The drums can get a little repetitive at times, and the piano is a little too muffled for my taste. Other than that, great track.
That was one of the things I was thinking of fixing. The drumbeat. As for the piano, I think it's just that the bass was too loud. My speakers have virtually no bass, so I can't tell how strong it is until I get replies LOL. It also feels that the flow is broken at 2 points to me: 1:16 and 2:27. I'm gonna work on that later as well :)
Catchy, but Repetitive.
Very catchy I must say, you had me humming the guitar part. Very beautiful. There is only one problem though. It's very repetitive. If you added a couple of different parts here and there I can see this shining beyond what it already does. Work on it! :)
I forgot to mention that I'm going to expanding it soon. This is just to show what's going on. I'm putting lyrics to it soon.
I can see this being a good song, except there's a layer of distortion over the whole thing. Work on the mastering of the track, and It can be better. Everything is all over the place.
So wait... is it the guitars, or is it some other type of distortion? I fixed it based on the assumption that it was the guitars that was creating the unwanted distortion.
If you or someone else can pinpoint where the distortion is, I will fix it immediately!
Thanks for the review!
This isn't a homework assignment
People won't like, or vote for that matter, depending on the time you worked on the piece. All that matters is the outcome. I don't think anyone cares if you spent 2 days or 2 years on the piece. If it's a piece of a shit, it's a piece of shit.
On another note, good song, I liked it.
Thankyou :3 . I know what you mean, but it's no where close to a piece of shit . Infact, I only been composing for 15 days, thats what people need to know =P . Thankyou for the review =D
You're really good. I feel that the only thing stopping you is your sound quality. If you get a better mic I know that it would be even more fantastic. You can imitate a variety of things! Keep voice acting. :)
Thanks a lot you really push me up to continue thaaaaaanks so much :D
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