gotoAndKill's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[RD2010 - It's alive]

Nice!

It doesn't remind me of Robots as much as it should but still, it's a swell track. Very good job.

mNl responds:

That's why i've added the "Lord vader - breath" and the C3PO voice ;)

This track should tell a story...
You know - from the begining of that robot (that's the breath etc.) till the end - where it just rocks ! :D

Thanks anyway !

[RD2010 - Robotic Feudal System]

Fantastic!

Ooooh, this is definitely one of the better RD2010 songs that I've heard. You should make it longer though. :)

trancedatlantic responds:

good idea!

[RD2010 Moving parts]

Woooah

The intro added so much to the song. Not because it was good, but because it was very generic. It started off very plain. I'm not sure if this was your intention but if it was that was a good thing. The way the track builds up, later you're just like "Holy shit, wow."

Fantastic job.

Sandwhich-lord responds:

Cheers , just thought it conveyed movement ...

[Ice Illusion]

Nice

I like it, especially the synths. The drums seem a little too generic. Since you have more time now, you should work on the drums and maybe add another synth or two.

Sekna responds:

Thanks man, I appreciate the feedback. I've been meaning to go back and do a full two minute version with less repetition and some better atmosphere with a good intro, and I'm looking to some better drums. I'll see what I can do in time. :D

[The Entrepreneur (WIP)]

Cool

I like it. The drums can get a little repetitive at times, and the piano is a little too muffled for my taste. Other than that, great track.

mauiboynokaoi responds:

That was one of the things I was thinking of fixing. The drumbeat. As for the piano, I think it's just that the bass was too loud. My speakers have virtually no bass, so I can't tell how strong it is until I get replies LOL. It also feels that the flow is broken at 2 points to me: 1:16 and 2:27. I'm gonna work on that later as well :)

[Feelings - Codilla]

Catchy, but Repetitive.

Very catchy I must say, you had me humming the guitar part. Very beautiful. There is only one problem though. It's very repetitive. If you added a couple of different parts here and there I can see this shining beyond what it already does. Work on it! :)

Codilla responds:

I forgot to mention that I'm going to expanding it soon. This is just to show what's going on. I'm putting lyrics to it soon.

[RD2010 Robot Death Machine]

Good Song.

I can see this being a good song, except there's a layer of distortion over the whole thing. Work on the mastering of the track, and It can be better. Everything is all over the place.

Pure-Metal-UTA responds:

So wait... is it the guitars, or is it some other type of distortion? I fixed it based on the assumption that it was the guitars that was creating the unwanted distortion.
If you or someone else can pinpoint where the distortion is, I will fix it immediately!
Thanks for the review!

[RD2010 AA - Mechanical Defeat]

This isn't a homework assignment

People won't like, or vote for that matter, depending on the time you worked on the piece. All that matters is the outcome. I don't think anyone cares if you spent 2 days or 2 years on the piece. If it's a piece of a shit, it's a piece of shit.

On another note, good song, I liked it.

AphoticAthanasy responds:

Thankyou :3 . I know what you mean, but it's no where close to a piece of shit . Infact, I only been composing for 15 days, thats what people need to know =P . Thankyou for the review =D

[Voice Acting Test]

Awesome!

You're really good. I feel that the only thing stopping you is your sound quality. If you get a better mic I know that it would be even more fantastic. You can imitate a variety of things! Keep voice acting. :)

WorldOfStriker responds:

Thanks a lot you really push me up to continue thaaaaaanks so much :D

[Drifting Away (Dubstep) [WIP]]

Yea Yea,

I haven't heard true Ambient Dubstep like this. Most of the time what I hear is usually Ambient 2-Step songs as they skip out on the wobble but keep the drums. I really like the track, especially the drums. I would suggest you keep the wobble because I think it's what makes the track unique, just tweak it a little more to make it go along with the song more. Other than that, fantastic job, can't wait to hear the completed song.

MA3HbO responds:

Thanks for the review !
Well to be honest i think this is one of my finest projects for now (having worked on it only a few hours).Its still repetitive and some sounds don't fit but i think i'll put alot more work into this track.The wobble indeed doesn't go too well, but then again i made it pretty fast.I spend most of the time on the drums and the ambiance, although there are no pads yet.I'll let you know when an updated version comes out.
Cheers and thanks again !